Trying vainly to appear as if he knew what he was doing, Guy inspected the beam while Tony fetched the sander. It was twice the width of his hand, and someone had gouged two crude V’s into the wood...
Saw it all coming, pretty much, but it was still well written. You have a penchant for pacing and strong descriptions. The final image was perfectly gruesome!
Thanks for sharing Jane.
Fabulous! Guy got no more than he deserved, lol.
Thanks Liz! It was fun to write 😁
This story pulled me in and I couldn’t stop reading!
So glad you enjoyed it Alexa ❤️
Great work. I agree with what Liz said. He got what was coming to him!
Thanks Hanna. I think so too!
Loved the switch to the dog's POV!
Thanks Scott. It was fun to write.
Saw it all coming, pretty much, but it was still well written. You have a penchant for pacing and strong descriptions. The final image was perfectly gruesome!
Thanks Joshua!
I enjoyed this a lot. Talk about escalating quickly! I love badgers though.
So glad you enjoyed it.
I LOVE this
Thank you so much Emily. I had a feeling you might! I’m going to check your writing out now.
You're making me want to write a spooky feminist short story now
Go for it! It’s very cathartic. 🤣
Just finished this! Great story, I was thoroughly gripped. Great ending. Now I find myself hiding under my duvet... x