We hid when we heard the men. Their voices sent us scurrying into the trees, clutching our clothes.
Powerful AF.
Thanks Jared. It feels as if we are rapidly going backwards & the bad guys are winning.
That is exactly what is happening.
One sentence flips the piece on its head. Fantastic writing and a very effective way of showing your message.
Oh, thank you so much. I'm glad you think it works.
The ending is so well-paced.
Thank you Jane. It’s a bit dark so I debated whether to post it.
I wouldn’t ever let that be a consideration. People feel okay about posting and reading horror stories after all.
True! Me included 😁
There you are then. Don’t worry :)
Powerful AF.
Thanks Jared. It feels as if we are rapidly going backwards & the bad guys are winning.
That is exactly what is happening.
One sentence flips the piece on its head. Fantastic writing and a very effective way of showing your message.
Oh, thank you so much. I'm glad you think it works.
The ending is so well-paced.
Thank you Jane. It’s a bit dark so I debated whether to post it.
I wouldn’t ever let that be a consideration. People feel okay about posting and reading horror stories after all.
True! Me included 😁
There you are then. Don’t worry :)